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The difference in drugs and alcohol in women.



sanderson8907 1 / -  
Mar 24, 2012   #1
I would like to know what I have to change and what I can add to help make my paper better. Thank you.

I think one of my strength in my writing is getting all the right details. I do try to get find information that is stated in more then one-piece work. I do know one of weakness is that I have a hard time putting out the information I have. I have a hard time explaining it all the way. Another weakness it that I have a hard time getting my papers to be the full length it needs to be. I get everything I need in but cannot get the full length that is requested.

zogi maral 2 / 6  
Mar 29, 2012   #2
Hi,

get or find ?? ---> ""get find information.." , I think one of them will be good

My suggestions :

"..one of my weaknesses is .."

"Another weakness" ---> how about : "Also, I have a hard time .."

I hope that helps


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