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Describe your short and long-term goals and how you plan to accomplish them. (1000)
Life has no meaning without goals. I set up my life goals regularly and plan to accomplish them step-by-step. My current short-term goal is to graduate from high school with high grades and to learn as much as I can so I will be prepared for college. It will not be that difficult to reach if I am responsible to my academic courses and put in the required effort before a test to show what I learned. Along with that, I am also working towards my scholarships so I can afford my education. By accomplishing these short term goals, I will finish the first step that is going to reach my dream, which is to become a doctor. There are people who are suffering from disease in developing countries. Another goal I want to achieve with degree is to help these people get better health conditions. In order to accomplish that, I will engage more volunteer opportunities at local hospitals to gain experience about how to take care of people and what to expect in the future.
Describe your short and long-term goals and how you plan to accomplish them. (1000)
Life has no meaning without goals. I set up my life goals regularly and plan to accomplish them step-by-step. My current short-term goal is to graduate from high school with high grades and to learn as much as I can so I will be prepared for college. It will not be that difficult to reach if I am responsible to my academic courses and put in the required effort before a test to show what I learned. Along with that, I am also working towards my scholarships so I can afford my education. By accomplishing these short term goals, I will finish the first step that is going to reach my dream, which is to become a doctor. There are people who are suffering from disease in developing countries. Another goal I want to achieve with degree is to help these people get better health conditions. In order to accomplish that, I will engage more volunteer opportunities at local hospitals to gain experience about how to take care of people and what to expect in the future.
