Hello Rina,
please use a spellchecker before you post.
I think you have good arguments. They just need to be tied to your
personal opinion. The prompt asks "To what extend do
you agree..". If you integrate this into your arguments, it is a nice essay.
have been fas
[quote=riny]it is a significant fact that traditional skills and a way of life
maybe "well-known fact"; "ways of life"
Do not know forget to use a capital letter in every word that starts a new sentence.
and customs shoul d be recognized by individuals.
cinated this trend[/quote]
in terms of clutural cultural and historical education
have a profou nd impact on next generations
children how to learn a moral and wisdoms to live in societies.
What do you want to teach children? I don't think you want to teach them
how to learn, but you rather meant general life advice in order to fit/cope with society? Additionally, I do not think that wisdom has a plural (in the English language.)