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There is no doubt the world is vigorously uniting and interacting via Internet and global events.



so_99 1 / -  
Mar 28, 2016   #1
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of globalization.

As the globe is frequently referred as a 'global village' in media now days, there is no doubt the world is animatingly uniting and interacting via Internet and events.

It may be fairly said globalization is deemed an international peacemaker, in pursuit of the wellbeing of all nations. It is portrayed as a strong bond between nations, often even as an efficient barrier from economical catastrophe in some countries. Indeed, there are impressive achievements globalization have induced and may in the approaching days.

EU, or the European Union in precession, is a well-defined example of a rewarding outcome. Consisted of 36 member states -in appropriate portion of countries some in fairly great power and some not- the union have produced some remarkable outcomes since its establishment in 1993. All member states benefits from the cheaper price of goods in markets, prone accessibility to the member nations in both transition and political areas, and the enactment of some effective policies distinguishing international business and trade sectors, significantly contributing to some countries dramatic ascent in the global market. Forming such union has doubtlessly deemed the influential power the Western is capable of wielding today on global stage.

Further more, not only in such big scale the globalization assets the world, but also in smaller sectors such as global entertainments and easy accessibility to other nations. The Olympics and the World Cup certainly are not only a great entertainment but also a sort of a panacea in various terms, the recent Brazil World Cup for instance. The unstable nation grappling with economical and social issue was able to gather itself, at least temporally, thanks to the global football event.

However, globalization doesn't always glitter in sunlight.
Recalling EU from the previous paragraph has started to shake from its roots in the recent days. Britain, its Prime Minister David Cameron in the forefront of the disintegration, is amid a controversial discussion on weather or not to exit the union. The country is weighing the scale, weather the benefits from the union outweighs the loss. Being in the union is like sharing an apartment in a way, you financially benefit from it but you have to deal with the roommate's habits; in this case, often accepting policies far from the nations' liking. Such withdrawal is being prevalently discussed among the EU member states, as one of its greatest powers conveys a tangible withdrawal stance.

Further more, there are notable concerns rising around the deficiency of individual countries qualities and uniqueness as the globalization continues, molding the world in one single piece. I believe as this starts to hike as a matter that is unprecedented to the world, it must be actively discussed and feasible measures must be established for the sake of the future generations.

Globalization indeed is a controversial topic. I believe the vital key is harmonization and adequate proportion of globalization. I regard it with great potential in the contribution of international peace and integration, however also as a feasible origin of global contention.

stku 2 / 2  
Mar 29, 2016   #2
As the globe is frequently referred as a 'global village' in media now daysnowadays , there is no doubt the world is animatingly uniting and interacting via Internet and events.

In my opinion the green part is a little bit weird.
yonathan66 30 / 27  
Mar 29, 2016   #3
Hello, i have some suggestion for you. I hope it can helps you. Thank you

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As the globe is frequently referred as a 'global village' ... =>i think your introduction is not strong enough, let me give you alternative => Some people think that the globalization has more merits than demerits. I strongly believe that the benefits of globalization outweigh the drawbacks as lots of convenience, such as Internet has been provided by this. However, this essay will discuss both of them.


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