'the most dramatic change was Japan' - Member of Travellers; IELTS

immobulus 3 / 4

Dec 15, 2014 #1

The table compares the number of tourist from three different countries; Japan, Australia and Canada between 1985 and 1995. It is measured in million. Overall, it can be seen the most dramatic change was Japan. Japan had the lowest and the highest travellers in ten period and Australian tourist remained stable.

By 1985, Japanese's travellers were the lowest of tourist from Australia and Canada, about 5 million, while Australia tourist were the highest, about 7 million. At the same time, the number tourist from Canada in the middle, about 6 million.

By 1995 travellers from Japan increased significantly from about 5 million to about 15 million and the highest travellers in that years were tourist from Japan, whereas Australia's tourist remained stable and around 7 million visitors. On the other hand the figure of Canadian tourist experienced a downward trend from 6.0 million to 5.5 million which was slight decrease.

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somasalims 15 / 26

Dec 16, 2014 #2

The table compares the number of tourist from three different countries; Japan, Australia and Canada, between 1985 and 1995. It is measured inby million. Overall, it can be seen that the most dramatic change was Japan. Japan had the lowest and the highest travellers induring ten period and Australian tourist remained stable.

Hi Icha! Let me try to correct you. First, you should put coma (,) after "Canada". Next, replace "in" with "by" because that is passive sentence. Then add "that" after seen. Last, change "in" with "during". Good Luck!

OP immobulus 3 / 4

Dec 17, 2014 #3

Okeh, thank a lot kak

tiaDS 73 / 222

Dec 17, 2014 #4

The table illustrates the total of tourists from Japan, Australia and Canada from 1985 to 1995, a 10-year period and is measured in million. The number of Australian visitors remained reasonably stable following the time frame while the figure of Japanese tourists recorded a significant changes in the end of the period.

By 1985, Japanese's travellers were the lowest number of tourists from Australia and Canada, about 5 million, while Australian tourists were the highest, about 7 million. At the same time, the number of tourists from Canada stood at the second position~~in the middle~~ , about 6 million.

By 1995(put comma here)~~travellers~~travelers from Japan increased significantly from about 5 million to about 15 million, and the highest number of~~travellers~~ travelers in that years~~were~~ was tourists from Japan, whereas ~~Australia's~~ Australians tourists remained stable ~~and~~ around 7 million visitors. On the other hand (put comma)