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It it easier to have a healthier lifestyle in the countryside.



queenannez 1 / -  
Jun 13, 2023   #1

life in a city or in the countryside



Nowadays, while most people think that people in the countryside have a healthy lifestyle, others believe living in the cities has more health benifits. In my opinion, it it easier to have a healthier lifestyle in the countryside.

On the one hand, there are some benefits of cities for a healthy lifestyle.For example, cities have health services such as hospitals, doctors, dentists, and leisure facilities for health like gyms or parks. People in the cities are more convenient to approach this health services than those in the countryside. However, cities are no longer places to enjoy a natural, healthy way of life because of agro-industry. The industrial waste from factories contaminate the food and drinking water, so they can endure dangerous diseases like cancer and astham.

On the other hand, living in the countryside brings fresh air and tranquility. People are overcrowded and stressed in cities, contrast with the countryside, where they can enjoy their day with peaceful atmosphere and friendly environment. Also, in the countryside, there are no more factory like in the cities, so the air is fresher. People can consume covering food every day to ensure their health better.

In conclusion, while cities have advantages of living healthy, it is much more easier to have a healthy lifestyle for people live in the countryside than those in cities.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15347  
Jun 17, 2023   #2
Task 2 essays do not require the writer to present a time reference in any writing portion. That is because the discussions are mostly general and non-committal to periods of time. For restatement accuracy, you will do best to refrain from time indicators in the essay unless you are referring to an event that happened to you or personal knowledge of a historical situation.

Discussion paragraphs are contradicting your personal opinion. For this type of essay, the only requirement is that you represent your opinion in the most believable manner. That requires you to do one of 2 things:

1. Prove that the existing perceptions are incorrect or;
2. Present 2 instances that prove your opinion to be the more convincing one.

Failure to accomplish one of the other will result in a partially scored essay. The examiner will not consider any explanations that do not directly relate to your given writer's opinion.


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