Hi vikki,
I think these paragraphs should be combined and compose one paragraph.
When it comes to educationbeing a game-changer of a country's development and growth,( I think this definition is not so necessary, it makes hard to follow your opinion. Besides it is repeated in conclusion) some always hold to the fact that the education or knowledge attained via experience is much more powerful than the formal education.
disciplinr
disciplinethey decorate an individual.
It is not so clear whether you mean formal education or discipline, morals ,principles and society evolve. They refer to what?
lead the eaceace .
[quote=vikki]ethics and ethics contribute a contry sustainancecountry sustenance as a leader,
I cannot understand this sentence.
Good luck