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Epistemology--Worldview--Ideology. We should learn philosophy to be open minded.



Askarie26 2 / 4  
Nov 8, 2016   #1
For decades, we have seen a number of disputes in this world only because of ideology.

First of all, I would separate between ideology and science in order to be easy to understand in this paper. Ideology is the way of human being to achieve their purpose. It is also the rule of acts what is a good and what is a bad. Sketchily, ideology is a reference how to life in universal view. In the contrary, science is just related to particular view which just happens in nature. So, we can make simple that ideology is a philosophical view, and science is a empirical view.

Thus, why have many ideologies in this world? From where those are coming from?

If you are asking to someone why we should do this, and why we cannot do that? They will answer with their worldview. Worldview is a theoretical philosophy, and ideology is a practical philosophy. Worldview is discussing about our outlook about human being, society, nature, and history. We could say that worldview is foundation of ideology.

Afterwards, how worldview could be different in each human being? The answer is because of epistemology. The way of human being gets knowledge. Sometimes, they have differences such as source of knowledge, method, and so on.

My conclusion is better for us to learn about philosophy especially the epistemology in order we can be open minded to address diversity nowadays.

I open to respond negative. This is my first writing. Thank you.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15385  
Nov 8, 2016   #2
Hasan, your grammar is quite inconsistent in this essay. By inconsistent, I mean that your sentences are not easy to read because of the problem with word usage and sentence structure. There is a tendency for you to say things in reverse. So when you say; "Afterwards, how worldview could be different in each human being?", the proper sentence structure for that statement would have been: "How could the worldview be different for each human being?" Do you see how the statement gains more clarity when the proper sentence structure is used? Next, I am wondering about the actual prompt or thesis statement that is supposed to be guiding this essay of yours. I wish I knew what the actual topic you were trying to discuss was. That way, I would be able to offer you more solid comments regarding the content and grammar usage of your research paper.
OP Askarie26 2 / 4  
Nov 9, 2016   #3
@Holt
I really thank to you for your kindness by giving me feedback. I will rewrite this essay to deliver my original thought in it.

I hope you may guide me.


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