IELTS task .Expaining why you want to take IELTS exam

The IELTS exam is the most baggage for my future.

First, When I was a child, my mother's health wasn't good. So, I always wanted to be a doctor. Although the equipments of Vietnam isn't backward, I want to study in Australia. THE UNIVERSITY OF SYDNEY which I want to learn in has a great environment and modern equipment for international students. This University has a medicine faculty for the students who will be a doctor. So, The IELTS is the most important exam for me and I need 6.5 score if I want to be accepted in this school.

Secondly, IELTS exam is a difficult challenge for me to know what is my level now. IELTS is the world's proven English test. More people go more places with IELTS. Over 1.7 million tests were taken last year enabling candidates to start their journeys into international education and employment. All of the facts make me believe that the IELTS is the great exam for all people. When I learn for the IELTS exam in internet and in ILA, my skill is improved very much, my vocabulary is much more than the past. In the next ten weeks, I will study hard, learn more about IELTS on many ways. Finally, I believe that I will success and have a high score of the IELTS.

This is all reason why I want to take the IELTS exam

When I was a child
I founded
the modern equipments for the international students
a medicine facultyies


I think it would be better to change the arrangement of this sentence. Firstly, you should mention that taking the IELTS test is an obligation for overseas students, and then write about the fact that in the most of the universities of Australia the required band score is 6.5.

Second, When I learn for the IELTS exam in internet and in ILA, my skill is improved very much, my vocabulary is much more than the past ---->Secondly, as I started preparing for the IELTS test, my English proficiency improved compared to the past.

Regards
Ahmad

The IELTS exam is the most baggage for my future. [I would refrain from using cliches in your essay to describe how the IELTS will affect or is affecting your future.]

First, When I was child, I wanted to study in Australia. 12 years old, I founded that I want to be a doctor. THE UNIVERSITY OF SYDNEY which I want to learn in has a great environment and the modern equipment for the international student.[What is the connection that ties these things together: your childhood desire to study in Australia, 12-year-old dream to become a doctor, and present goal of attending this particular university? The relationship (significance) between the first and second sentence remains unclear.] So,The IELTS is the most important exam for me,[You haven't successfully argued why it's important, though.] and I need 6.5 score if I want to be accepted in this school.

Second, When I learn for the IELTS exam in internet and in ILA, my skill is improved very much, my vocabulary is much more than the past. In the next ten weeks, I will study hard, learn more about IELTS on many ways. Finally, I believe that I will success and have a high score of the IELTS.

This is all reason why I want to take the IELTS exam. [In the second paragraph, you explained how the IELTS has benefited you and how you'll prepare for the upcoming exam. But, overall, did you effectively answer the prompt? Although you covered importance, benefits, and preparation, you didn't provide enough examples to answer why you want to take the exam.]

Can you give me some example topic sentences, please. Thanks

I decided to immigrate to Canada 4 years ago, therefore I had the IELTS general session exam two times.

The most recent one was on last January. Unfortunately I got 5.5 only, 6 Speaking, 5.5 Writing, 5 reading, and 5.5 for listening.

I need little more improvement, as I need at least 6.5 for speaking, 6.5 for reading, 6 for the rest.

I am trying my best to improve my English skills.

God help me

Good luck to your IELTS.

It could be better if you change a little bit.

Although ->Since the equipments of Vietnam isn't backward, I want to study in Australia.

If I have the IELTS examget the IELTS , the door of future will open for mecould be opened to me .( I don'tam not sure about the topicssentence , can you give me some moreideas , thanks)

Firstly , When I was a child, my mother's health wasn't good was sick andSo, I always wanted to be a doctorthat is why I want to be a doctor . Although the equipments of Vietnam isn't backwardupgraded well . Consequently, I decidedwant to study in Australia. THE UNIVERSITY OF SYDNEY the university of Sydney which I want to learn in has a great environment and modern equipment for international students. This University has a medicine faculty for the students who will be a doctor . (you don't need to mention about the Medicine faculty for whom because every one knows doctors are graduating from it) So, The IELTS is the most important exam for me at the moment and I need 6.5 score if I want to be accepted in this school.

I would recommend to start the introduction like, that your ambition is to become a doctor and the reasons behind it and then explain it in brief manner why you need to do it in foreign countries.

The question is why we want to take ielts exam ?
so we have to put forward the reasons why we have to take it.
You can say it is one of the main requirement of the universities as well as the for the immigration.They basically check for the requirements in order to make sure whether we ca survive, study and work in english speaking countries without much difficulties.

You can write about the listening, speaking, reading and writing test.How it going to help you and etc.

Hope it helps.

Good luck for your exams.

Hi
Hard work as much as you can
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Best wishes