I have included a few corrections and examples below. Attached is a screenshot of edits to the paragraph that begins with "First of all". It sounds like you learned a valuable lesson and certainly one that others could learn from as well. : )
Experiences help us improve and progress in our lives. We learn a lot from things we experience during our lifetime. They teach us different aspects of life
makes us more mature and smarter
in dealing with problems, hardships,
and in decision making.
Personally, I agree with the statement that most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons.
two examples to illustrate this.
First of all,
during my third year of graduation from dental school in N
elhi. We were introduced to clinical work and were allowed to work on patients. I was very weak in practical work of a subject called prosthodontics,
which deals with fabrication of dentures. The procedure
many steps, starting
making a model of patients oral cavity to fabrication of denture and took around 15 days for completion.
ee the attached screenshot for edits to the full paragraph. Also, be sure to spell out the numbers 1-9. Numbers from 10 and up can be written in numerical form.font :)