sayes,
please, let me help you improve some parts of your essay.1
Different jobs and places require people to speak multiple languages .
This sentence is grammatically correct; I would like to suggest an alternative way to write this sentence.
Knowing foreign languages, one do his job effectively as he can communicate with people from different countries.2
when I was in fifth grade in the school of my hometown, we had to take foreign language class. I didn't have any idea about the importance of languages.I decidede to learn French language.
I would like to suggest the following sentence as the alternative way to tell people about the obligation of students in your school.
The fifth grade students in my school have to take a foreign language class. I didn't have any idea about the importance of languages.I
decided to take French language .3
AsAfter I graduated from university and I found that it would have been better if I had takenlearned Spanish classinstead of French during my school days.