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"About the experience of shopping for a new car" - Reasons to buy a Toyota Corolla



eraf18 1 / 1  
Nov 15, 2010   #1
Reasons to Buy a Toyota Corolla

Shopping for a new car can be difficult. There are many options that make today's cars great cars. But I prefer the Toyota Corolla. Aside from the Toyota reliability, the Corolla has great gas mileage. Also, you can get it for an affordable price. The 2010 Corolla is by far one of today's best compact sedans.

Toyota's are known for their reliability. You can buy a twenty year old Corolla and trust it. So you know that you can buy a new one a trust that you can drive it for the next 5 years. Even with the recalls of other Toyota made vehicles just this year, Corolla is still the leading compact sedan. The reliability accounts for low maintenance expenses. It isn't always easy to find a reliable car that is also fun to drive, but Toyota did it with the Corolla. Some customers would even say that this car will be the only car you will ever need.

The Corolla also is the leader in its class for gas mileage. Corolla's aim to please today's consumer. Getting good gas mileage is especially important in today's economy. With an average 25 miles per gallon in city and 36 miles per gallon on the highway, Corolla outranks other cars in its class. With less gas mileage you also leave a smaller carbon footprint. Owners of this year's model are reporting an average of 566 miles on one tank of gas.

In this economy, you need to get more car for your money. Corolla is a great value. Starting at $15, 450, the base model is a very good value. You can get a 5 speed manual transmission with 132 horsepower. You also get a 36 month/36,000 miles warranty general maintenance warranty. The quality for the price is almost unbelievable.

It's easy to find a good car in today's world, but the Corolla is a great car. Reliability is key when purchasing a new car. Gas mileage is not only good for your wallet, but it's great for the planet as well. Affordability is important. If you are looking for a reliable, fuel efficient, affordable car, this is the car for you.

auds 2 / 40  
Nov 15, 2010   #2
Auds at your service!

Shopping for a new car can be difficult. There are many options that make today's cars great cars. But I prefer the Toyota Corolla. Aside from the Toyota reliability, the Corolla has great gas mileage. Also, you can get it for an affordable price. The 2010 Corolla is by far one of today's best compact sedans.

Your right, shopping for a new car can me difficult, but for me our beginning sentences didn't cut it for me. It is just too bland. Where's the imagery and excitement? Okay everyone knows about reliability, and gas mileage, but what about the great technology. I think that if you do some more extensive research on the Toyota corolla such as the performance and awards then there would be more to this essay. I think you should insert an anecdote on how difficult shopping for a new car can be, for example: from experience, my the way my dad shops for a new car is just horrible, but it does pay off in the end. He goes to ever dealership and (I mean at least 5) then he compares prices and all this other whoolabahoo.

Toyota's are known for their reliability. You can buy a twenty year old Corolla and trust it ^that it won't leave you stranded in the middle of the road. So you know that you can buy a new one aand trust that you can drive it for the next 5 years. Even with the recalls of other Toyota made vehicles just this year, Corolla is still the leading compact sedan. The reliability accounts for low maintenance expenses ^compared to other cars such as_________ It isn't always easy to find a reliable car that is also fun to drive, but Toyota did it with the Corolla. Some customers would even say that this car will be the only car you will ever need.

I have to say that the biggest and most important quality of a Toyota corolla is it's reliability, but in this paragraph you did not prove it to me as a reader.

In this economy, you need to get more car for your money. Corolla is a great value. Starting at $15, 450, the base model is a very good value . You can get a 5 speed manual transmission with 132 horsepower. You also get a 36 month/36,000 miles warranty general maintenance warranty. The quality for the price is almost unbelievable.

You used the word value too close together. It is kind of redundant. My only problem with the third paragraph is that you relied on that paragraph alone to insert all of these numbers and it's too much for 1 paragraph. I felt like I was reading a list.

All in all this essay was good but not WOW or AMAZING. You told me what I wanted to hear but, I feel like there wasn't any effort. My advice to you is to do more research on the awesomeness of this car, and check out customer reviews (the good ones).

I hope I helped!
OP eraf18 1 / 1  
Nov 15, 2010   #3
Thank you for your help, I have done a lot of research and also read the good reviews. The car sounds so great I am really wanting one right now. if you have anymore advice, I would appreciate it.

Shopping for a new car can be difficult. There are many options that make today's cars great cars. But I prefer the Toyota Corolla. Aside from the Toyota reliability, the Corolla has great gas mileage. Also, you can get it for an affordable price. The 2010 Corolla is by far one of today's best compact sedans.

Toyota's are known for their reliability. You can buy a twenty year old Corolla and trust that it won't leave you stranded in the middle of the road. So you know that you can buy a new one and trust that you can drive it for the next 5 years. Even with the recalls of other Toyota made vehicles just this year, Corolla is still the leading compact sedan. The reliability accounts for low maintenance expenses compared to other cars such as a Kia Sophia. It isn't always easy to find a reliable car that is also fun to drive, but Toyota did it with the Corolla. Some customers would even say that this car will be the only car you will ever need.

The Corolla also is the leader in its class for gas mileage. Corolla's aim to please today's consumer. Getting good gas mileage is especially important in today's economy. With an average 25 miles per gallon in city and 36 miles per gallon on the highway, Corolla outranks other cars in its class. With less gas mileage you also leave a smaller carbon footprint. Owners of this year's model are reporting an average of 566 miles on one tank of gas.

In this economy, you need to get more car for your money. Corolla is a great value. Starting at $15, 450, the base model is a very good value. You can get a 5 speed manual transmission with 132 horsepower. You also get a 36 month/36,000 miles warranty general maintenance warranty. The quality for the price is almost unbelievable.

It's easy to find a good car in today's world, but the Corolla is a great car. Reliability is key when purchasing a new car. Gas mileage is not only good for your wallet, but it's great for the planet as well. Affordability is important. If you are looking for a reliable, fuel efficient, affordable car, this is the car for you.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13053  
Nov 26, 2010   #4
Shopping for a new car can be difficult.

I don't think this opening sentence is as effective as it could be. You could give an opening sentence that expresses an intriguing idea about the Corolla. It would be great to begin with an interesting idea that would appeal to the curiosity of any reader.

The rest of the essay is correctly written! I see no mistakes, and it has great structure because every paragraph is about a different topic, with each topic expressed in a topic sentence at the start of the paragraph.

This is a great testimonial for the Corolla! Are you sure you are not the CEO of Toyota pretending to be a student-essayist!? :-)
(just kidding)


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