IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Explain the benefits and shortcomings of online classes and traditional class

Online classes became increasingly well known during the Covid-19 pandemic ,while traditional classes are getting less common due to restrictions. While both have advantages and disadvantages, I believe online
classes have flexibility, nevertheless traditional classes offer face-to-face interaction.

Online classes can be conducted from any place with internet availability and devices.Traditional classes have to be conducted in a certain place with specific persons and it doesn't require internet connectivity.But in the interactive traditional class you can connect students around the world.

In the online classes, one of the biggest benefits is that you can join on it from anywhere around the world even if you're sick or can't be physically present. In the traditional classes you have to be physically present otherwise you won't get the class.

Online classes also have drawbacks, one is that immense use of device which deteriorates your health. Another drawback is absence of connectivity with classmates .Traditional classes doesn't cause that kind of problem and you can connect directly with your classmates,

In conclusion, online classes and traditional classes both have benefits and shortcomings. Online classes have more benefits but traditional classes are no less than online classes in benefits.

Is this essay supposed to be a response to a Task 2 IELTS writing exercise? If so, then you need to increase your word count to at least 250 words to meet the minimum word requirement. Less than that will result in an automatic failing score. While you wrote good reasons in response to the question, it could have been better written and formatted for clarity and coherence. You see, the prompt that was provided requires a compare and contrast response. What does that mean? It means that the writer is required to provide a good and bad, pro and con reasoning per paragraph. The format should be:

Sentence 1 - Advantage reason
Sentence 2 - Why?
Sentence 3 -Example
Sentence 4 - Disadvantage of the "advantage"
Sentence 5 - Explanaton
Sentence 6 - Example (optional for task 2)

The 6th sentence is optional because, if you are writing a task 2 essay, then you cannot have more than 5 sentences per paragraph. You may only write a 6th sentence if you still have writing time after reviewing and editing your text or, if you were short on the word count after you finished your draft. If you are writing this for an English writing exercise, then you should write at at least 6 sentences per paragraph.