First, you should post this type of essays under the "Writing Feedback" forum. Second, I beleive that you are preparing for IELTS or TOEFL and also your topic is the prompt of this task. So, I am giving my comments based on my assumption;
After enjoying a movie, many people don't criticize much about how excellent it is and simply the quality of this movie depends mainly on human's feeling.
... Here you have two seperate ideas and I always recommend to have two different sentences for different ideas. So I feel you better split this line into two.Many people do not ciritize the movies after they enjoyed watching them. In fact, the quality of movies depend on how strong they can influence human feelings.
If audiences feel satisfied and good
... yes of course :)If the audience feels satisfied and contented
.... your way is not wrong, but I think this sounds better because you give more emphasis on to audience.
This is a very good essay.... You display very good writing skills; grammar, vocabulary, ideas, structure :)
I think you don't you need not to worry about this task at all :)