'Famous park in Sanadaj' - Describe your last summer holiday

hi all.
could you correct my sentence please ?

Last summer my friends and i decided to went to our friend's house in Sanandaj. We start my trip in the afternoon and came at night.

after having dinner we slept and got up late in the morning.
On the first day we got around the city and enjoyed.
On the second day we drove to Oraman. Oraman is a zone in the Iran. we ate very Delicious lunch in the Kamale. Kamale is a village before Oraman Takt. after see Oraman we went to Marivan. Marivan is a border city. There is a very beautiful lake in Marivan that called Zarivar.

On the third day we went to Abidat. Abidar is a famous park in the Sanandaj

Thanks a lot for corrections

You gulped basic necessity

It would be better to explain that this city is located in which province of Iran as a non-defining clause.



What places did you visit? How did you enjoy? What did you do through the trip?


---> suggestion :"Oraman is a mountainous region located in xxxx"

Thanks ah_zafari. You have some study material for me?

Hi Amit, as I told you before, all the materials I have are hard copies and I cannot send them to you. I wish I could but it is impossible :((