Last summer my friends and i decided to
wenttravel to one of our mutual friend's
It would be better to explain that this city is located in which province of Iran as a non-defining clause.
my tripour journey from xxx (Place) at xx(Time) in the afternoon and arrived there at xxx (Time) came at night .
On the first day we got around the city and enjoyed.
What places did you visit? How did you enjoy? What did you do through the trip?
Oraman is a zone in the Iran
---> suggestion :"Oraman is a mountainous region located in xxxx"
we ate very d elicious lunch in the Kamale, where .
Kamale is a lovelyvillage xxx km away from Oraman before Oraman Takt . We continued our journey toward after see Oraman we went to Marivan, Marivan is a border city near Iran-Iraq border region . There iswas a very beautiful lake in Marivan that called Zarivar, (Give some information about the lake. What did you do there?) .
On the third day we went to Abidat. Abidar is a famous park in the Sanandaj (why is it famous? What did you see at the park? Why do you still remember it?