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"What famous place would you you like to visit?" - TOEFL ibt writing


What famous place would you you like to visit ? Use details and reasons to support your response.

When I was a kid, I dreamed of having a chance to visit France, which is the center of fashion. The most fascinating thing about France is that it is both picturesque and historically important. There are also plenty of structures as well as buildings which were constructed long time ago. But what strikes me does not stop at that. Paris, the capital of France, is one of the world's most striking cities for fashion and style. My sister works as the officer-in-charge-of designers for a fashion company. When young, I possessed a basic understanding of fashion as my sister told me a lot of interesting things about Paris along with her career. From that time, she influenced the passion of designing in my mind. That is why I am into creating new designs and look forward to visiting my dreamland one day.

Thanks for all advice.
your faithfully,
Hugh

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