Hello every one. I am preparing for IELTs test and planning to attempt an exam in April 2014. I would request you to please provide me with your valuable points which can help me to improve my english.
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Food plays a vital role in the life of all human beings. There are different kind of people who like different kind of foods. For instance, some like vegetables, fruits, while other like fast food. Those people who are eating fast food regularly are more like to get high cholesterol, blood pressure, sugar and several other diseases so it is evident that fast food is unhealthy.
Over a period of years, as fast food chains have evolved, most of the people, including childrens, teenagers, youngsters, are fond of eating fast food on daily basis. It is quite obvious from the fact they are not aware about the hidden negative aspects of Fast food. It was revealed in one the the top newspapers that huge consumption of fast food is affecting the growth of children, creating significant health problems for aged people and emphasis was made to have banned all fast food companies. Doctors too have agreed with the fact that consuming fast food on regular basis is not good for health at all and must be prevented.
In my opinion, an awareness campaign should be launched comprising of doctors, mothers and affected people, where general awareness need to be given to all citizens on disadvantages of consumption of fast food. This way we can improve our society and can help all individuals to remain healthy and eat healthy food rather than wasting money and life for fast food.
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Food plays a vital role in the life of all human beings. There are different kind of people who like different kind of foods. For instance, some like vegetables, fruits, while other like fast food. Those people who are eating fast food regularly are more like to get high cholesterol, blood pressure, sugar and several other diseases so it is evident that fast food is unhealthy.
Over a period of years, as fast food chains have evolved, most of the people, including childrens, teenagers, youngsters, are fond of eating fast food on daily basis. It is quite obvious from the fact they are not aware about the hidden negative aspects of Fast food. It was revealed in one the the top newspapers that huge consumption of fast food is affecting the growth of children, creating significant health problems for aged people and emphasis was made to have banned all fast food companies. Doctors too have agreed with the fact that consuming fast food on regular basis is not good for health at all and must be prevented.
In my opinion, an awareness campaign should be launched comprising of doctors, mothers and affected people, where general awareness need to be given to all citizens on disadvantages of consumption of fast food. This way we can improve our society and can help all individuals to remain healthy and eat healthy food rather than wasting money and life for fast food.
