The figures inform on the design/location of a machine that can produce electricity from wind power

The diagrams below show the design for a wind turbine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The figures inform the design for a machine that can produce electricity from wind power and the appropriate location to be placed. Overall, it can be seen that placing the turbine in the sea may not destroy the pleasure of the landscape while the turbine on the hill produces maximum electricity.

The equipment of wind turbine consists of blades created by wood or fiberglass material, wind sensor to detect speed and direction, the generator which can produce 1,5 megawatts power, steel tower, and computer to receive the data and adjust the direction and angle of blades. The process starts when the blades are forced by the wind and the force is converted to electricity by the generator. The direction and blades angle is adjusted by wind sensor and the computer.

The machine can be installed on the hill and in this case, it can be also installed in the sea. Placing wind turbine in the sea may not spoil the landscape while the turbine placed on the hill can maximally produce electricity because of maximum wind strengths. However, the domestic turbine can only produce 100 kilowatts of power.

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Hi Ivan,
Here's my contributions towards your report summary of IELTS writing task 1. I hope you can follow through.

1st paragraph:
- The figures inform the design forof a machine that canproducegenerates electricity from wind power and the appropriaterecommended locationsto be placedfor maximum electricity output .

- Overall, it can be seen that placing the turbine in the seabelow the sea levelmaydoes not destroybadly damagethe pleasure of the landscape. (stop, new sentence)

- However, the turbine that is placed on top of the hill producesreceives maximum electricitywind strength.

I would like to suggest you that you need to complete the way that you present the information in the overview / introduction of your essay. You accidentally created only two sentences in what was otherwise a very strong start to your essay. Your mistake was compressing the information into the two sentences you presented. Hopefully, the above-mentioned feedback can help you in the next practice. :)