Finland to set become the first country to ban coal to use for energy

Bams17 28 / 38

Nov 27, 2016 #1

Finland to set become the first country to ban coal to use for energy.

Recently, Finland government releases news that Finland has been ready to ban coal as their energy. It is because the coal is predicted will disappear from market in 2030, not only that but also using of coal has been decline in Finland starting from 2010. Although ban the coal as their energy source, Finland does not spontaneously leave it, but smoothly move away and try to discover renewable energy such wind power energy. This concept gets good response from others countries such as UK , Australia and The Netherlands. Those country will phase coal out within 10 up to 15 years. Consequently, as coal substitution, countries have to discover a renewable energy resources.

Source: newscientist

akbarmappiare 31 / 445

Nov 27, 2016 #2

Hi Bambang..
These are my corrections for your summary

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