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Finland can be a pioneer for using the new energy, that does not depend on the coal


andika08 81 / 80 16  
Nov 28, 2016   #1
Summarize article : Finland set to become first country to ban coal use for energy

Finland was the first nation that will make the regulations to ban the coal energy by 2030. This is the fact that the cost of coal experienced significant drop over the years. Afterwards, the authorities decided to allocate their budget to the another renewable energy in the previous year. Apart form the new innovations, if this condition apperead to be true, it would make the country to be radical since applied this law banning coal. However, with this situation Finland can be the pioner for using the new energy that does not depend on the coal energy anymore.

Source : newscientist

mem77 62 / 98 6  
Nov 29, 2016   #2
Dear Andika, here some advice for your writing and feel free to correct me too!

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