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First Baby with DNA from Three Parents Born in the World



Ucha MSN 17 / 22  
Sep 28, 2016   #1
A baby who has three biological parents was born in the world. Although the practice was known as controversial technique, doctors from U.S team based in Mexico applied genetic mutation to born a healthy baby.

Shaban, the baby's mother, carries gens for Leigh syndrome as genetic disorder. Her first two children could not be saved from birth because of Leigh syndrome even though the mother was healthy. So she decided to get help from the New Hope Fertility Center in New York.

The doctors at the institution advised to do 'spindle nuclear transfer. Shaban's egg was removed and inserted it into a donor egg which had had its nucleus removed. Then the egg was fertilized with her couple. Nine months later, the baby was born since it was implanted in Shaban's womb. When the baby's mitochondria were tested, the result showed that less than 1% Leigh syndrome was found.

Since the baby grew up, the doctors always monitor the baby to make sure that the levels of the Leigh syndrome remain as low.

PHA2016 39 / 38  
Sep 28, 2016   #2
Hello Ucha,

Although the practice was known as controversial... [be carefull in your collocation]
May you change the sentence: the baby was born by using a controversial technique which the doctor team applied a genetic mutation....

... the baby was born since it was he or she implanted ...

When the baby's mitochondria were are tested,as the result showed that it less than 1% Leigh ...

hope these help


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