Letter to a friend, asking for help - IELTS WRITING TASK 1 GENERAL TRAINING

You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend.

In your letter:
Give details of your study plans explain
why you want to get a part-time job
suggest how your friend could help you find a job

Dear Arti,

Hallo how are you? Are you okay? Now, I live in Solo and I want to study plan in your country. Next year I program to continue further studies master's degree, the major is management business at Queensland University. I schedule in there for two years and I need a place to stay there.

I schedule there is not only learn but I want to take a part-time job, because in there I do not get a scholarship so I have to pay the study fees myself. In addition I still have to disburse a boarding house, the cost to eat everyday, and I want to find the experience to work abroad.

I would be grateful if you could help me to get a job in your country. Maybe you can find a job vacancy in accordance with my criteria or maybe you have acquaintances company that is in need of employees and may be important documents what should I take it.

I would really like to hear from you. Write back soon.

Best wishes,

Dipa.

hai dipaaa..

I schedule in thereAustralia for two years and I need ...

I schedule there is not only learnmy agenda not only learn but I want to take a part-time job, because in there I do not geti did not found a scholarship so I have ...

... is in need of employees and may bepossible important documents ...

Here is my feedback for you..

Hallo how are you? Are you okay? how is your life? ... I want to study plan in your country.

Next year I program decide to continue further studies my study master's degree, the major is management ...

I schedule in will be living there ...

I also have a plan schedule there is not only learn but I want to take a part-time job, because in there I do not get a scholarship so I have to pay the study fees provide the study funding by myself.

In addition I still have to disburse look for a boarding house, preparing the the cost to eat everyday living cost.

Hope this helps.

Hi Dipa,

- Now, I live in Solo and I want to studyhave a plan to study in your country. Next year,I will continue my study program to continue further studiesin master's degree, the major ...

I have a schedule in there for ...
- I have schedule there is not only learn but also I want to (...), because in there I do not get a scholarship so I have to pay the study feestuition by myself

- ... company that is in need ofan employees and may be what kind of important documents whatwhich I should I take it .

Hopefully it helps.