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Further study is necessary - many young people want to start earning money as soon as possible.



wangyu 1 / -  
Jan 1, 2015   #1
Further Study is Necessary
Some people believe that they should leave school as soon as possible to develop their career through work experience. However, I think that studying at a college is the best way for people to prepare their future career. The knowledge students obtain from higher education is the key to a promising career.

A higher degree is an advantage for students to find jobs. Nowadays, the job market is becoming increasing competitive, and sometimes there are hundreds of applicants for one position in a company. It is true that some employers will be more likely to offer jobs to the people who have university education background. Finally, college students can survive the fierce competition of society. Therefore, the people who own higher educational background have more opportunities.

People will be more likely to become professional through further studying. As we all know, uniting theory with practice is an important principle for people to work. That is to say, theoretical guidance is essential. It is worth to have further study to fill a vacancy in our knowledge. Academic qualifications are required in many professions. For example, it is impossible to become a doctor, teacher or lawyer without having the relevant degree. Therefore, university graduates have access to more professional job opportunities, and they have a tendency to earn higher salaries than those without qualifications. Absolutely, studying at a college is rational, only in this way can they lead respectable lives.

Higher education provides opportunities to go on with the studies which they like. They learn what they should learn and have no space to develop the area where they are really interested in. To be different, the course of higher education is based on student's interests. Students could have full free to learn what they like. The more knowledge, the better. Knowledge perfects students and equips them catering for the need of society.

Except the knowledge, higher education provides an independent environment for students. They live with classmates in the university, away from their parents. They are supposed to learn how to arrange their own lives and how to get along with others. There is no one to tell you what you should and shouldn't do any more. At the same time, independence also teaches students being responsible for themselves. They are adults now, and you have free to do everything. As the cost, they should undertake all the consequence.

Many young people want to start earning money as soon as possible. In this way, they will have chance to gain real experience. It is the practical choice for them. However, in a long term, they will face potential competition, because of lacking of professional knowledge. With the development of knowledge economy, there should be excellent brainy talents and skillful talents with high qualities. Without knowledge we can not exist in the society and will be obsolete.

Basically ,I believe further study is necessary . It refers to one person exploit his advantage to the full.

smunoz23 3 / 10  
Jan 1, 2015   #2
Change words in the essay like "I Think" to something like "I Know" to show that your firm on your answer.

Change mistakes such as "lives" to Lifes,"Students could have full free to learn what they like"??,"As we all know, uniting theory with practice is an important principle for people to work"??, "Knowledge perfects students"??,"Except the knowledge"??,"higher education provides an independent environment for students" How?

Provide solid examples, change sentences that do not make sence, and keep a good flow in the paper


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