Unanswered [4] | Urgent [0]
  

Home / Writing Feedback   % width Posts: 3

IELTS Task 1 : Garlsdon City on plan to build a supermarket


SHanafi 120 / 415 93  
May 12, 2014   #1
The map depicts the possible spots for building a new supermarket in Garlsdon city.

Overall, there are 2 sites on plan, noted as S1 and S2. While S1 will be built in the countryside, the location of S2 is held in the free traffic zone in the town centre.

As per the map's features, the suggested location, S2, for building a new supermarket is placed in the resident area. Also in the south-west and south-east of the map there are 2 rush belt cities. The highway from Bransdon (16 km with 15,000 population) to Cransdon (25 km with 29,000 population) and vice versa is linked to the centre of the town were the location of S2 is sited in. This might be pointed as the best spot compared with the area of S1. The location of S2 would probably reflect how important it is to the local inhabitant living around there.

Turning to the S1, does it has no bargaining for better spot? S1 location is sited just off the main road to the town of Hindon, lying 12 km in the north-west. Also, located between railway and main road and pass through the outskirt's road makes such spot easily to attract the traveler, while this is not allowed in the area of S2. Besides, the location of the countryside enables for S2 having a large parking area or any additional features to serve the customer.




dumi 1 / 6,928 1592  
May 12, 2014   #2
The map depictsshows the possible spotspotential locations for building a new supermarket in Garlsdon city.

Overall, there are 2two potential sites marked on the plan, notedmarked as S1 and S2. While S1 will be builtis located in the countryside, the location of S2 is held in the free traffic zone in the town centre.
Pahan 1 / 1,906 553  
May 12, 2014   #3
As per the map's featuresAccording to the map, the suggestedproposed location (no comma) S2, for building a new supermarket(no comma) is placed in the residenta residential area. Also in the south-west and south-east of the map there are 2tworush belt cities.


Home / Writing Feedback / IELTS Task 1 : Garlsdon City on plan to build a supermarket