women are in good position
forontheir various professions.
As women are segregated from men for gender but they can bring a great improvement for societyAlthough there is gender discrimination, women can bring a great improvement to society.
Therefore, it would be better to givethem a chance in joining the army, the navy and the air force as men do.
Women are the part of nation to enhance the progress of its future civilization.Women have also the responsibility to progress the state of the nation.
, many of whom are qualified female students who could capably serve more than the male does.
-- Great stand!! --- This should not be separated from the preceding sentence. Both can be in one sentence.
The army, the navy and air force all are top range governmental profession.
-- This argument is too subjective. Try to give more examples or evidences supporting it.
Some people think women are weaker than menso that they are not deservingon this kind of profession
In conclusion, women are
the members of society , however like men, hence, they have liberty in joining the army, the navy and air force.
it will reach
inthe goal of being a developed country within a short period of time.