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IELTS: Germany and Italy spend between 150 to 158 thousand pound sterling in all categories



joythblessy 86 / 266  
Mar 3, 2013   #1
The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
- You should write at least 150 words.
- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart illustrates about the amount of spending in thousand pound sterling on photogenic films, toys, CDs, perfume, tennis racquets and personal stereos by Britain, France, Italy and Germany.

Overall, Britain spends the highest amount in all six categories. France spends minimum in personal stereos, tennis racquets, and perfumes. Germany spent minimum in the remaining categories, CDs, toys and photographic films. The expense of Germany in all six items between 145 to 150 thousand pound sterling with minimal difference in all categories. In case of Italy, the spending is in between 145 to 158 thousand pound sterling. The highest 158,000 pounds sterling for toys and the lowest for personal stereos.

There is a considerable difference in the spending of France in all six items. It is between 145 to 148,000 pound sterling for perfumes, tennis racquets, and personal stereos. The remaining three items France spend between 158 to 165 thousand pound sterling, which are CDs, toys photographic film. In Britain expanse on six categories significant difference. It is equal for personal stereos and tennis racquets 153 thousand pound sterling. The four items expenditure is between 160 to 172 thousand sterling that include perfumes, CDs, toys and photogenic films.

In short, these four countries displayed a significant difference Germany and Italy spend between 150 to 158 thousand pound sterling in all categories. France also followed the same trend expect in photogenic film. The financial capacity of the Britain is high among the four countries.

The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
- You should write at least 150 words.
- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.


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mhss 18 / 53  
Mar 3, 2013   #2
Hi,

Your analysis is wonderful so as writing. Hear are some few points.

In Britain expanse on six categories EXHIBITE A significant difference. It is equal for personal stereos and tennis racquets 153 thousand pound sterling. The EXPENDITURE FOR four items is between 160 to 172 thousand sterling that include perfumes, CDs, toys and photogenic films.

MHSS.


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