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I need a good headline for my newspaper article based upon Jim Carrey


allstarz000 /  
Jan 4, 2011   #1
Hello
I am kinda new to this but please help
Thank you
I am looking a headline that is really strong and creative that is based upon Rodney Dangerfield.

Thanks

Nanoluvv8D 2 / 6  
Jan 4, 2011   #2
I know this isn't exactly what you asked for but maybe create a headline that incoporates one of his famous catchphrases.. ("I don't get no respect" or "I get no respect, I tell ya")
OP allstarz000 /  
Jan 4, 2011   #3
I am so sorry
I accidentally typed Rodney Dangerfield, i was just reading something on him
but i wanted a headline for Jim Carrey
Sorry about That
(Nanoluvv8D, So sorry)
ericao2010 12 / 32  
Jan 4, 2011   #4
I would actually use Nanoluvv8D's idea and incorporate Jim Carrey's famous lines from one of his movies that you really enjoyed.

Hope this helps :)
OP allstarz000 /  
Jan 5, 2011   #5
Hey I need some help with this newspaper article

Hello
This is my newspaper article
I would like if you guys read it and told me some suggestions or make some corrections
Thanks

It is hard to believe that James Eugene Carrey's passion to become a comedian started out with a misguided attempt to embarrass him in front of his peers.

Carrey's second grade teacher was fed up with him mocking the musicians so she attempted to embarrass the young Carrey by making him retell his jokes to the whole class. This may have embarrassed others but in Carrey's case it failed to produce the embarrassment the teacher expected.

Instead the young Carrey produced a sensational show. "Even the teacher couldn't help laughing" said Carrey to Nickelodeon Magazine.
The teacher then rewrote the Christmas program to include Carrey's routine. Jim agreed, delighted to perform before the entire assembly. "That was the beginning of the end" said Carrey to Nickelodeon Magazine.

Several years later, Carrey gets a deal with his seventh grade teacher; the last 15 minutes of class was Jim's - if he did not fool around during class. "I'd sit there and finish my work, then start working on my set" Carrey explained to Fort Worth Star-Telegram.

Carrey had not lost touch with his seventh grade teacher. He told Nickelodeon Magazine that she send him several of his routines and a few pieces of art such as "Teacher with an Axe Through Her Head"

Before his performance Carrey did not have many friends but he received a number of friends after his performance.
em2always 15 / 79  
Jan 6, 2011   #6
embarrassed others but in Carrey's case ...need a comma after others

it doesnt seem like a full article...its super short...where is the substance?

please look at/comment my essay on leadership


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