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Let Heat lost and Energy Waste by Air Flows



Anna94 47 / 50  
Nov 2, 2016   #1
The diagram below shows how heat is lost and energy wasted in a house because of air getting into and out of the house.

The picture describes about the process of air that get out and get into the house to remove heat and energy residue. Overall, the number of part or things in the house that let the air out is less than the air leak into the house. Both entering air and leaving air can pass the same part of the house.

The air is produced by many things and part of the house. It passes all the part of the first and second floor of the house. The parts are dryer vent, crawl space, kitchen fan vent, and bathroom fan vent, plumbing stack vent and attic hatch. The air is generated by dryer vent in the right side of the house. The energy waste (water waste) that is produced by outdoor faucet can be removed through crawl space in the left side of the house. It can rise to the second floor by evaporating process.

In the second floor of the house, air can be blown by kitchen fan vent. There are some energy sources such as electrical sources, lamp, and water faucet (in the first floor). The light energy can be produced by the lamp. It rises to the balcony. It can be released to the atmosphere by passing the attic hatch. The light in the balcony can be left the house by passing plumbing stack vent. An amount of air gets into the door and rises to balcony. It unites with air that is released from bathroom fan vent and releases to the environment by passing plumbing stack vent and attic hatch.


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mardian24 46 / 60  
Nov 3, 2016   #2
Hi Ana, let me give some comments

1 ...that getgets out and get ...
We are talking about air which is uncountable, so you should use singular verb
get ----> gets

2. It passes all the partparts of the first and ...
because there are many parts in this home, you can use plural form

3. It can rise to the second floor by evaporating process
It is true that water flow by evaporating process. But it can be an opinion. Because in the question there is mention about evaporation. So to avoid your own opinion, it is better to not using it.

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