Highly-invented-sophisticated technology have most important impact on living standards of mankind

There has been major advances in technology over recent decades and this has led to significant improvement in people's live agree/disagree

Introduction
In this era, some believe that highly-invented-sophisticated technology have most important impact on living standards of mankind. In my standpoint I agree with that statement, because advances technology make people have a lifestyle of hedonism and change people's mindset to leave traditional lifestyle.

Conclusion
To conclude, it is immensely clear that cutting-edge of technology have an important influence on people's over recent decades. I would suggest that people do not affect the lavish lifestyle and remains yourself.

hai dipa, i try comment your passage.

In my standpoint, i agree with that statement cause advances technology make people have a lifestyle of hedonism and change people's people mindset to leave traditional lifestyle.

... have an important influence on people's people over recent decades.
... not affect the lavish lifestyle and remains yourself. become yourself.

Hi Dipar!

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I would suggest that people doshould not affected by the lavish lifestyle and remains yourself.

Hello. i think it's too short to become an essay in IELTS test since we know it should be at least 250 words. between an introduction and conclusion you need an opinion and discussion about the problem. so you can't conclude the essay wthout explain the problem an give your opinion about it. may it help you :)