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IELTS TASK 1 information about how heat is released and energy is used



ilankelo21 36 / 40  
Jan 22, 2016   #1
The given picture describes the information about how heat is released and energy is used due to the house of installed circulation system. It is noticeable that the cottage is cooler as the amount of air leaking into is greater than that of wind leaking out.

According to the data, the place where the wind is blowing into consists of various forms. Window, door, electrical outlet, ventilation, and dryer vent are the considerable spot where the air can get into. This makes the temperature in the house colder and the energy used to create a tolerable atmosphere is tiny.

To make a balance temperature, the house has been installed some attic hatch on the ceiling. Aside from that, the cottage also is complemented with bathroom fan vent, plumbing stock vent, and two recessed lights. This will be benefit when summer comes in which the heat can be released through the installed tools. However, all air circulations are closed which result in that house temperature is warmer.


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annahatef 30 / 8  
Jan 23, 2016   #2
According to the data, the place where the wind AIR is blowing COMING into consists of various forms.
... are the considerable spot where the air can get into .

To make a balance NORMAL temperature, the house


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