Interest in subject , gain qualification - the result of a survey of adult education

The chart illustrate the percentage of out come the reason young people decide to study . pie chart provide the information that how the coast of each course should be shared?

Lets divide our chart into three category : interest in subject , gain qualification. And, current job, prospects of promotion, enjoy study, and the last part, change jobs , to meet people. As it can be seen, the striking feature for reason to study is about 40% of student who are interested in subject . The second category shows similar pattern , approximately 20%for each. Moreover, the lowest percentage reported from 3rd proportion around 10%respectivelly.

Regarding to the pie chart , money should be shared between three category: individual, employer, and , taxpayer 40% , 35% , 25% for each respectively.

To sum up, one of the most reason to study is interest in subject, and 40% of cost should be shared for adult education.

The chart illustrates the percentage of out come the reasons young people that decide to study


the coast ? what do u mean ?


Let's
categories
btw, i cannot understand how did you divide the educational purpose into 3 categories because i see here there are more than three

thank you to read my essay. i want to know it was all my mistake about this essay?

Well, this task is aimed at assessing your report writing skills. So, you need to be more formal in your writing style here. Adopt a more official tone which explains the details of the graphical presentation in a concise and illustrative manner. Your tone should not sound personal as you've done above. This is the structure I suggest for you to follow for this task;

1. Introduction
2. Overview - discuss the major trends very briefly
3. Details