By the advent of globlization and increased tourisim promotion, many peple start to travel across world frequently.
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For instance, when a country receives tourists all over the world, its hotel industry, transportation, local business all flourishes.
Then expand on this idea by giving a more specific example to show how these industries prosper.
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