The Internet is known as a widespread source of information, but there is a considerable question: Is the Internet a reliable source or not? Mainly it is. There are some clear reasons. Firstly, most of scientific articles and the news of new achievements are shared by the Internet. Secondly, since the Internet is one of the favorite media to communicate and everyday lots of information are bandied, so people try to share the authentic and up-to-date information to show that they have something in common with others. Finally, if any null content be shared in the Internet, certainly some of the users will comment on it and we will be notified. However, some sites don't consider the authenticity of their contents and this issue decrease the reliability of the internet.
The internet as a reliable/unreliable source of information
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The Internet provides users with a large amount of information. However, people still question the reliability of this information source.
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It would better if you could explain the result or the effect of these reasons. However, I feel that three reasons you listed are not quite relevant to the topic.
The Internet is known as a widespread source of information, but there is a considerable question: Is the Internet a reliable source or not?
The Internet provides users with a large amount of information. However, people still question the reliability of this information source.
most of
-> most
It would better if you could explain the result or the effect of these reasons. However, I feel that three reasons you listed are not quite relevant to the topic.
The Internet is known as a widespread source of information, but there is a considerable question: Is the Internet a reliable source or not? Mainly it is.
Need more improvement in presenting this idea. This is your hook with what you open your essay and if this is going to be boring and not clear them you'll be trouble :(
My suggestion;
The Internet gains its audience at a terrific speed on daily basis. However, is it a reliable source of information is a serious concern today.
Secondly, since the Internet is one of the favorite media to communicate and everyday lots of information are bandied, so people try to share the authentic and up-to-date information to show that they have something in common with others.
This is another confusing sentence. Better you rephrase this line. Pay attention to what Misterwandering's comments too :)
Tnx 4 ur suggestions
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