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JAPAN; Talking about like and dislike, I would say that I prefer talking about things I like



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Sep 23, 2014   #1
Talking about like and dislike, I would say that I prefer talking about things I like. Therefore, I will talk about Japan as my favorite country in the whole world. I knew about Japan since elementary school and I was falling in love at first sight with "Sakura no Hana" or in English it has meaning of Sakura flower. Japan is very unique and amazing country for me. Especially if it was connected with the way they life and how well their culture grew along with technology. Japan has very nice culture like: yukata, ikebana, Tea ceremony, Hanami, Hanabi, etc. Within their culture, I can feel deep bound between one another which living their culture for long exist. Otherwise, Japan's technology is really amazed me. The created many things and many ideas. That was so innovation. Japan gives me many inspiration of how I can manage my life! Their culture is also make me thought about why, why I cannot think like them and love Indonesian's culture as much as their? That is way i love japan more than I could say for Indonesia. Because japan has taught me many things, their culture has made my eyes wide open of the world; teach me about pride; teach me about discipline in time; and its teach me way to be hard worker. Japan was my inspiration and its become my passion this day, which also become motivation to be greater than before.

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Sep 23, 2014   #2
What is this essay for? It is good but also brief. Maybe you could expand on some of your points.


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