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IELTS TASK 2: Learn by self better than with a teacher

upinipin 32 / 49 1  
May 3, 2014   #1
Some people think that they can learn better by them self than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reason to develop your reason.

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Study is an interesting activity for many people. Study can be done in anywhere. Some people study in class with teacher and some people autodidact. Subjects such as math, sciences, literacy, and art learned in school. Majority, all of this subject study in class with teacher. Kinds of subjects are pattern to be accomplished, and this pattern can be explained by the experts in their field. In the other hand, some subjects can be learned by self.

Learn with teacher more interesting than learn by self. If people study in class it is guided with teacher and it is planned by step by step. A teacher to teach a lesson to their student based on their experience and knowledge in general. This knowledge transfer provide in depth understanding about the lesson.

Learn autodidact better for people who can discipline in organizing themselves to learn. Sometimes, people after learn in the class with teacher more good studied by self than studied with guide because deeper understanding in subject. This is type of people can reflect back on what has been described by his teacher. Learn by self sometimes confusing in the way of understanding and thus require further guidance from people who are expert.
Eva Novita Sari 47 / 71 2  
May 3, 2014   #2
If people study in class it is guided with teacher and it is planned by step by step.

You should put conjunction because You use two verb
dumi 1 / 6924 1592  
May 6, 2014   #3
Well, for this task, the best is to have a 4 para structure that contains an intro, two body paras and a conclusion.
fikri 5 / 317 71  
May 6, 2014   #4
hello, this is IELTS task 2, right?
here, you should write at least 250 words or more, this is the rule, if you wrote less then 250 words, it means that you didn't follow the test's instruction
SHanafi 120 / 415 93  
May 7, 2014   #5
Specifically for the conclusion, eddies, one of contributor, ever give me an advice how to construct conclusion
Here i want to share

The Concluding Paragraph has three parts:
1. a 'conclusion' signal: In conclusion, ....etc,
2. a summary of the main points or a restatement of the thesis (in different words!)
3. a final comment, based on the information in the essay.
The final comment can be:
a warning or prediction (often using the first conditional: If ..., ... will ...)
a suggestion or recommendation (often using should or must)

hopefully helps you :D
eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1208 476  
May 8, 2014   #6
If you could, state your own opinion in the introduction itself with a statement expressing your opinion very clearly. That helps you take the reader in your desired direction.

Do you write 3 paragraphs? Yes, but tell you the truth, you are playing with fire. You need an extra work to develop more than one argument and in a correctly constructed essay each argument requires a separate paragraph.

The best advice is to have 4 paragraphs for your essay that includes the introduction, the (two arguments between) bodies and the conclusion.
ShineStarJoti 2 / 5  
May 8, 2014   #7
Hello Upinipin,

According to me for getting good knowledge we required a good teacher who can guide us better then the self guidence bt the problem is that sometimes we are fail to find the skilled teacher. However we think that it is good to study by our self than from a weak teacher.

In our modern socity we are blessed with may advanced technology like internet from where we can learn more affectively than teacher .

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