Level of satisfaction - Line graph - IELTS WARRIOR

The line graph shows the level of satisfaction of the health care system in four countries in three years. Summarize the information by reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The graph depicts the satisfaction level in the healthcare system in four different nations from 1991 to 2007. Overall, satisfaction levels in the UK and the US rose gradually, whereas Canada experienced a sharp fluctuation, and the Netherlands remained relatively stable. The most dramatic change was in Canada, where the figure dropped significantly before rising again.

In 1991, only 10% of Americans were satisfied with their healthcare system, and this figure rose slightly to around 12% by 2007. Meanwhile, the satisfaction rate in the UK was at a higher start of approximately 22% and grew steadily to nearly 28% over the same period.

By contrast, Canada began with the highest satisfaction rate at 60% in 1991, but this figure declined to just one-fifth by 1998. It then rebounded sharply to 40% in 2007. In the Netherlands, satisfaction remained relatively stable, fluctuating slightly around 48-49% before dropping marginally to about 47% at the end of the period.

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Mr Calma

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There are several types of graphs. The line graph, the bar graph, the columnar graph, to name but a few. So you gave a general image reference once again, without considering the type of image represented. This will result in point deductions for your summary overview. Familiarize yourself with the types of images used in the Task 1 essay. It will pay off for your score in the long run. Good work on the trending section though. It was an accurate summary of the given information.

The second paragraph is short by 1 sentence of meeting the required number of sentences in a paragraph. You could have added information by referencing the areas where the measurements overlap. Those are bonus scoring references because most writers do not pay attention to the overlapping sections of the image. Referencing those indicate that you took the time to actually analyze the image and provide a proper observation of the given information.