The life expectancy and GDP of certain countries

The provided table gives data about the life expectancy and GDP of certain countries, namely the USA, Spain, Australia, Poland, India, and Mali in 2009. It is obvious that the USA contributed to its GDP the most while Australians' life expectancy ranked the highest. But, Mali, which obtained the lowest GDP, also was the country having the average lifespan lower than others'.

In the year 2009, America was converted into the most well-off nation by GDP, at $45,900. Moreover, its life expectancy was 78, which was the third highest among six
researched countries. The Australian had the longest average lifespan, at 82, which was similar to the figure for Spainish people. GDP of Australia was the second highest of $38,600, which was around $7000 lower than that of the USA. Following this, Spain have the total GDP coming up to $32,500 in the same year.

In contrast, GDP figured in Poland amounted to $18,000, that less than half of USA's. The average lifespan in this country was relatively high, at 75. When it comes to India, the number of dollars contributed in its GDP was $3,000, constituting just a third of Poland's. It had the life expectancy of only 65 years old in 2009. Out of six nations, Mali was the country attained both GDP and the average lifespan which accounted for the lowest.

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