Unanswered [3] | Urgent [0]
  

Home / Writing Feedback   % width   Posts: 4


Do you like living in a city or countryside?



cuteko143 1 / 2  
Feb 8, 2014   #1
Some people would say that living in a city is way better than living in countryside. But for me, living in countryside is the best.

Advanced technology, reliable transportation and convenient as ever. These are just few things what people like about living in a city. Buildings, establishments, excellent schools, and entertainment are mostly situated in cities. Transportation in cities is much more advanced than in countryside. LRT and busses will take you anywhere you want in no time. Also, education in countryside makes no match for the high quality education in cities. But, living in a city also has certain disadvantages. Overcrowded, it is one of the problems a modern city faces today. Because of the cities convenient and innovative life, people tend to migrate to cities to live. Pollution is also a major problem. Certain people who live in cities just throw or dump their garbage anywhere. Also, crime rate in cities are higher than those in countryside.

Living in countryside is way different than living in cities. Witnessing breathtaking sceneries everyday as you wake up while inhaling the breeze of fresh crisp air will surely relax your day. Also, the friendly, hospitable and family-oriented people will always welcome you or help you anytime. Unlike in cities, countryside has less pollution since it has no lot of vehicles. The only problem is the transportation. Since only few vehicles are in the countryside, you will have a hard time waiting for a ride.

Both places has its own pros and cons. Each has different lifestyles. It is in the decision of a single person where they will live. Some will choose living in a city while others choose to live in countryside. For me, living in a countryside is better than living in a city

dumi 1 / 6795  
Feb 9, 2014   #2
Advanced technology, reliable transportation and convenient as ever.

This is too abrupt. Where do you find these things? You need to specify;
In the city, one has superior access to advanced technology, reliable transportation and convenience in contrast to what a person living in the countryside enjoys.

Living in countryside is way different than living in cities. Witnessing breathtaking sceneries everyday as you wake up while inhaling the breeze of fresh crisp air will surely relax your day. Also, the friendly, hospitable and family-oriented people will always welcome you or help you anytime. Unlike in cities, countryside has less pollution since it has no lot of vehicles. The only problem is the transportation. Since only few vehicles are in the countryside, you will have a hard time waiting for a ride.

In the introduction, you said you prefer the city to town. Therefore no point in talking about the pluses of countryside in your body paras.
OP cuteko143 1 / 2  
Feb 9, 2014   #3
In the introduction, you said you prefer the city to town. Therefore no point in talking about the pluses of countryside in your body paras

thanks for this...dumi,how can i improve my write-ups?
Ngoc Mai 1 / 2  
Aug 14, 2015   #4
Do you like living in the countryside or in the city?

Honestly, I love living in the countryside. Some people would say that living in the city is better than living in the countryside. Advanced technology, convenient transportation, high quality education and good health care are few things what they enjoy about living in the city. Although living in the city has many advantages, I generally prefer living in the contryside. Because, in countryside, the life is very peaceful, quiet and safe. Also, the friendly and generous people, who will welcome you or help you at anytime. Especially, nobody can deny the fresh air in countryside since it has fewer vehicles. Each has a different lifestyle. It is singularly the decision of each person where they will live. For me, living in a countryside is the best.


Home / Writing Feedback / Do you like living in a city or countryside?
Do You Need
Academic Writing
or Editing Help?
Need professional help with your assignments? Fill out one of these forms:

Graduate Writing / Editing:
GraduateWriter form ◳

Best Essay Service:
CustomPapers form ◳

Excellence in Editing:
Rose Editing ◳

AI-Paper Rewriting:
Robot Rewrite ◳