Yes,there are more advantages living in a house than in an apartment.
U should improve your information about organization and structure of an essay. What I quoted above cannot be considered as an introduction. Open the essay with a motivator. Then reword the topic as the thesis statement of the essay, and finally write a blueprint.
The topic is "advantages and disadvantages" type. So, allocate one paragraph to advantages of an apartment or a house and another one to disadvantages. At the third paragraph of the body compare the positive and negative aspects of living in an apartment and a house. In this paragraph u should also give your opinion.
Conclusion: Restate the thesis statement and write a clincher.
In order to write a good essay you should organize your ideas in an appropriate way.
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Ahmad