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Each location offers different advantages and disadvantages based on wind strengths and scenery look



nurainiyusuf16 47 / 73  
Oct 27, 2016   #1
The diagrams below show the design for a wind turbine and its location.

The pictures illustrate the design of machine which is used for generating electricity from a wind and its proper location. The turbine consist of blades, steel tower, wind sensor, generator, computers, and wind as the energy source. Overall, each of locations offer different advantages and disadvantages based on wind strengths and scenery look.

The process is will be started when the turbine get signal from sensor adjusts bladed about direction and angle of wind. Following this, blades which are made by fibreglass or timber will spin automatically. The speed and direction of this movement is set by wind sensor and passes into generator. At the same time as the generator reach maximum pressure, it will produce 1,5 megawatts electricity.

There are some proper location for wind turbines which is near from house, by the sea, and in the mountain. If the machine is located near from place to live, the turbine will produce lesser energy about 100 kilowatts but it does not decrease landscape view. The second place is in the mountain, as a consequence the turbine will produce maximum electricity due to the big of wind strength. But, it is not good since the scenery is spoiled. The last place is by the sea which is one place where the turbine gets maximum wind, does not ruin the landscape, but it is render difficult when the turbin gets touble as people need more time to reach the location.


  • The design for a wind turbine and its location


faizunaa17 49 / 66  
Oct 27, 2016   #2
Hello Aini, i will give you some suggestion :
The turbine consist of blades, steel tower, wind sensor, generator, computers, and wind as the energy source

1. Wind is not part of the turbine -____-

2. The process is will be startedwill be started / is started when the turbine get ...

is will be ??? it's not proper

... get signal from sensor thatadjusts bladedblade about direction and angle of wind

4. the turbine (subject) + get (verb) + signal from sensor (object ) + must be followed by that + adjust (verb)

5. Bladed ? what is the meaning of bladed ?

6. direction and angle ---> it has same meaning . What about the speed ? Have you mentioned it ?


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