Task about the 4 main functions Vietnamese people used with mobile phone in three years

the statistic of Calls, texting, audio recording and making photos, using a mobile device

The table illustrates data about the 4 main fuctions Vietnamese people used with mobile phone in three years ( 2005, 2008 and 2010).

It can be seen that while the percentage for Calls, texting and recording audio declined over the period, the opposite was completely true for Taking photo. It's also evident that people almost used mobile phone for calling others in all years.

In 2005, Making calls witnessed the first position with total of users . The second and third belongs to messages and record audio with 82% and 78% respectively. After 3 years, there was a stability in call function which following by a slight downward trend by 3% in the year 2010, but Texting messages and recording kept falling through 5 years.

Of Taking photos, the using this type was the least common in the first two years but the figure for it went up to standing at second position at the end of period with 77%.

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