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How to make a sponge cake - Process - IELTS WARRIOR



Mr Calma 17 / 2  
Aug 30, 2025   #1
The diagram below provides instructions for making a sponge cake. Overall, it is clear that this human-driven process consists of eight sequential steps, beginning with gathering materials, followed by baking, and ending with presentation.

Regarding raw materials processing, it begins with the gathering of fundamental ingredients such as flour, sugar, eggs, and butter, which are crucial for creating the cake's unique texture and flavour. Following this, the ingredients are combined in a mixing bowl, where they are carefully poured and stirred together. Additionally, this mixture is poured into a well-shaped mould to undergo the baking step afterwards, which is ready for the following procedure.

In terms of garnishing and serving this dessert, the cream will be put on as the first layer, followed by spreading jam to create unique flavours. Subsequently, this cake can be adorned with various decorations, making it visually appealing before being presented, thereby ending the process.

Tysm!!!
Mr Calma


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Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15921  
Aug 31, 2025   #2
The diagram

There are several types of diagrams that are used for this test. You should familiarize yourself with those differing images so you can use the correct diagram reference and increase your TA score in the process. This is a procedural diagram since it discusses the procedure by which a cake is baked. The more accurate your image description, the better your preliminary scores will be.

The diagram below

I explained to you why you should not reference the position of the image provided in the previous thread. Please review that explanation because I do not like repeating myself and the instructions I provide for the improvement of the exam taker.

The rest of the description is acceptable. it is detailed and shows the degree of your English vocabulary. However, I question your ability to properly follow instructions during the actual test since you have made a repeated error in this practice test. Your ability to write in English may not be equivalent to your ability to properly understand the language.


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