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[TOEFL] What makes a good neighbor? - Optimistic people


yushan 1 / 2 1  
Oct 10, 2013   #1
Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.

Neighborhood is the nearest relationship between people. Whether you accept or not, neighbors are the people who may know, observe and help you. Since that, we would like to choose neighbors who have specific characteristics, as m, optimistic attitude, politeness and justice are the good qualities of a good neighbor.

Optimistic people are my most prefer neighbors. If there were bad news occur in my life, positive neighbors would encourage me and accompany me to conquer the hard situation. Another important aspect of being a good neighbor is to be polite. The foundation of a relationship is polite interaction. If we are rude neighbors, we might have high potential to argue or fight with each other. Many arguments were origin from rude conversation, so that I would like to be neighbor with polite people. Moreover, good neighbors are justice. They pay attention to community's condition. If people see someone put trash at public place, then they should stop it. If they notice illegal action, they should call the police to help. We can have safer and better living environment if justice neighbors take these actions.

something 23 / 52 5  
Oct 10, 2013   #2
If we are rude neighbors, we might have high potential to argue or fight with each other

It is better ===> If we were rude neighbors, we might had high potential to argue or fight with each other
Pahan 1 / 1,907 553  
Oct 10, 2013   #3
Optimistic people are my most preferred neighbors.

... good idea, something not very common :)
I prefer my neighbors to be optimistic people.

If there wereare bad news occur in my life, positive neighbors would encourage me and accompany me to conquer the hard situation.

Neighbors are the first people who come to assist us when we have bad times in life. If they are optimistic and positive people, they can give us hope in winning such traumatic situations..... Now give a specific example to support this reason.

Another important aspect of being a good neighbor is to be polite.

.... take this reason into a new body paragraph.


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