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IELTS: man to man interaction changed; reason - technology


chien 1 / 1  
Apr 19, 2014   #1
topic: Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, the variety of communication systems used widely. As technology develops, it has negative influences in many respects. However, I strongly agree with that the technology has large positive effects on relationships between people.

The main advantage is that technology has enabled people stay in contact with each other more closely. While public use the Internet or smart phone to share information to each other at different positions. Instead of using letters, technology advanced not only gives us more spare time but also convenient and efficient. More, even if family members who are in different countries, they also can use the Internet to connect each others, especially though the images or videos, they can feel close. Furthermore, technology is also essential for students, live in remote districts, shared the valuable natural resources with friends.

Another issue is that in the ever-accelerated updating of science and technology, technology provides opportunities for people to establish the social network. In the past, people might have had pen friends in other countries, but now, thanks to the social networking websites, people can easily to find someone who has similar interests. Also, they can connect with friends who have been out of touch for a long time by using the Internet. In this way, technology is beneficial to humanity develops positive relationships.

In conclusion, I agree with that the technology has more optimal effects on people's interaction, because it helps ordinary people to make new
friends and to maintain relationships.

niesaysi 16 / 284 83  
Apr 20, 2014   #2
While public use the Internet or smart phone to share information to each other at different positions.

This is actually incomplete.

Instead of using letters, technology advanced not only gives us more spare time but also convenient and efficient.

Instead of using letters in communication, people can now use technology to keep in touch with others conveniently and efficiently.

More, even if family members who are in different countries, they also can use the Internet to connect each others, especially though the images or videos, they can feel close.

As instance, family members who are in different countries can see each other through the use of Internet.

Furthermore, technology is also essential for students, livelike in remote districtsareas , to shared the valuable natural resources with friends.

Another issue is that within the continuousever-accelerated updating of science and technology,

, but now, thanks to the social networking websites, people can easily to find someone who has similar interests.

In this way, technology is beneficial to humanitytowardsdevelopsdeveloping positive relationships.

I agree with that the technology has more optimal effects on people's interaction, because it helps ordinary people to make new
friends and to maintain relationships.

Hope this helps you :)
OP chien 1 / 1  
Apr 20, 2014   #3
Thank you for your kind help :)


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