TASK1 MANUFACTURING INSTANT NOODLES

the production of instant noodles

The given diagram depicts the process in which the instant noodles are manufactured. There are distinctly 8 different steps, from the initial storage silos to the eventual labeling and sealing.

Looking at the first stages, the number of flour is contained in storage capacity before mixing with water and oi to convert a solid form. Following that, the rollers transfer the mixture to the machine system. During the next step, the mixture is spread into equal dough sheets and then divided into straight strips.

At the fifth step, the manufactured chain continuously separates the noodles into each disc with the standard weight. Moving on to the next stage, the noodles are cooked with oil and dried to put into the cups. From this, packing the vegetables and special spices is the main factor that makes different flavors between the brands. The mechanism of chain ends completing the canned noodles with the labeling and sealing.

Avoid redundancies in word usage. Distinct and different are similar in reference in this case as there are 8 different, thus distinct, steps in the manufacturing procedure. This may have an adverse effect on the LR scoring considerations. The trending statement is also missing in this presentation. That should be a strong and obvious reference towards the end of the summary. Reviewing the text again, it appears that the writer will benefit from further separating his summary sentences into individual topic references so that he can properly word the trending statement. As of now, that is clearly missing from the reference. The lack of image upload prevents me from showing the writer an example of how this can be done.

The second instructional paragraph seems to be missing some information. While flour is mentioned as having a specific number, he did not refer to the actual measurement which I assume was referenced in the original presentation. The lack of complete information makes the sentence incomplete and difficult to understand.

Why is there a sudden reference to canned noodles? The original simply said instant noodles. If these were to be canned, then that reference should have been indicated in the summary to create a proper and complete overview of the process from beginning to end. Such sudden appearances of information will tend to confuse the reader.