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IELTS WRITING TASK 01 - MAPS - Central Library



Nguyendangquang 1 / -  
Mar 19, 2025   #1
The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given map illustrates the floor layout of a community library 20 years ago and at present.

Overall, there are some new changes in the public library, with the appearance of the highly technological facilities, and the disappearance of the furniture for relaxation as well as the area for adult non-fiction materials. It is also noticeable that there is the relocation of the zones for adult fiction books.

20 years ago, the library was quite simple. Clusters of tables and chairs were equipped in the center of the area and were between the sections for adult fiction books and non-fiction ones. At the top left corner stood was a room for CDs, videos and computer games, which was opposite the room for children's materials. At the bottom right corner stood a reception desk, facing the room for entertainment materials.

At present, the central library has undergone massive changes. The room for CDs and games was replaced by a section for storytelling events, incorporated with a zone for children's fiction books with a few sofas. The children's book section at the top right corner has been demolished for a new lecture room to be erected. At the bottom, the reading room has been superseded with a novel computer room, and the enquiry desk a new café. The section for adult non-fiction book on the left was replaced by several separate zones, including the information desk and a row of self-service machines. On the opposite side, the adult fiction books were transferred to the top of the information desk, making way for the zone of all reference materials. All the furniture in the middle of the library was removed, and the entranced remains intact.


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Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15593  
1 day ago   #2
This essay should not be more than 200 words. That is the maximum you can write within 20 minutes. 282 words indicates that you took at least 40 minutes to write this task. Which means you will not be able to complete this task within the allotted time frame. Failure to complete the task within the allotted time will result in an automatic failing score.

There is no need to be highly descriptive of the location of things in the report. That is because the reader does not have access to the image you have been provided with so a general description is always sufficient for the task 1 essay. Do your best to keep it simple and complete the essay within 175-200 words only. Otherwise, you risk failing the test based on a technicality.


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