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I'm a mechanical engineer; Academic background and work experience


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May 31, 2013   #1
Hi everybody I'm Le. I'm an engineer. I'm from vietnam. I really love english but I'm living and working in a small town where there's no good english center to train english. Thus, I train by myself. I hope I will get a little help from all of you. Thanks!

My short essay

Introducing my work

I'm a mechanical engineer. I had been trained regularly and methodically in mechanical branch at university of transport and communications. I graduated on october 8th, 2010. I have been working for PHU machinery .,LTD for two years and two months. At PHU machinery I work in the mechanical workshop which solve any problem occur in company. The first eight

months I was responsible for supervising repair works, finding out and creating the maintenance process for mechanical equipments. I also created the enclosed repair process for all important equipments if necessary. I could explain specifically as follows:

- supervision includes: analyzing and judging specifically daily works for quality, rating of progress and workers' labour attitude.
- finding out and creating maintenance process include: creating effective maintenance processes for the most important equipments and a few which work in an extremely hot environment.

-creating a repair process documentation guide includes: creating a repair process for some of important equipments which are difficult to dismount.
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Jun 1, 2013   #2
I am a mechanical engineer. I had been trained regularly and methodically in the mechanical branch at the University of Transport and Communications . I graduated on October8 , 2010. I have been working for PHU Machinery, LTD. for two years and two months. There, I work in the mechanical workshop and solve any problems occurring within the company. The first eight months, I was responsible for supervising repair works, which includes analyzing and judging specifically daily works for quality, as well asrating progress and workers' labour attitudes . I also found out and createdmaintenance processes for mechanical equipment . To elaborate, I created effective maintenance processes for the most important equipment,a few of which were tailored for equipment working in extremely hot environments . Finally,I created the enclosed repair processes for all important equipment, which are difficult to dismount, when necessary.
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Jun 2, 2013   #3
Thank you so much Didgerigoo. Could i ask you one more question? About the sentence " I work in the mechanical workshop which solve any problem occur in company". I meant our Mechanical workshop will be solved any problems not me. So could i use relative pronoun "which" as mentioned above?.


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