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Media Habits Today - celebrities became the role model for ordinary people



faizunaa17 49 / 66  
Oct 26, 2016   #1
The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationships of celebrities such as actors, singers, or footballers. They should spend more time reporting the lives of ordinary people instead.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?


Nowadays, prominent people not only act as the people who just singing and acting in the podium, but also become the role model of society. In response to that phenomenon, many mass-media use it as their opportunity to attract attention from many people. Media look like publish everything that occurred between celebrities to boost their ratings among watchers. Unfortunately, as a result of media ambitious project, they often forgot that there are many infamous people that have more inspiring story and not as popular as the artist. I tend to be agree if media give space to unwell-known people for showing their daily life.

First of all, actors still famous even though without too much exposing by media. There are still a lot of people that need media to help them reach the dream. For instance, today many children cannot continue their education because of the lack of money. They select to work in the early age for helping their parents fulfil their daily needs. Imagine if the media use their power to report in and spread it to all over the world, it will make people give many donation and doing charity activities for helping poor people. In contrast, it will have less benefit if they use all of their time for publishing famous people's daily activities.

Secondly, today some artist sometimes report the media to the legal entity because of their disappointing of media publication. For example, usually media exaggerate some celebrities' accident for viral purpose. Consequently, they must give much compensation to the artist to avoid them prosecute into police. In contrast, some media create program that give many chances to ordinary people for showing their talent. It also gives results of increasing the popularity of the media. It was proven that different method can produce the same result, even more useful.

In conclusion, it is not bad if media still report many famous people's daily activities. But it looks better if they give many spaces for infamous person to show their talent and real condition especially when they need some help.

Ucha MSN 17 / 22  
Oct 27, 2016   #2
First of all, actors ARE still famous even though without too much exposingTHEY ARE NOT EXPOSED MUCH by media.

There are still a lot of people that need media to help them reach the dream . IT IS BECAUSE MANY PEOPLE RESPECT TO THEIR FAVORITE FIGURES TO KEEP APPEARING IN SOCIAL MEDIA.

... for helping their parents fulfilTO FULFIL their daily needs.

... it will make people give many donationMUCH DONATIONS and doing charity activities ...
alfa7 19 / 22  
Oct 27, 2016   #3
Hi Faizunaa17 , I want you to obtain some suggestion from me,

here we go:

... many mass-media use itthey as their opportunity to ...

be careful for you pronoun

Media looks like publish everything that (...) boost their ratings to obtain among watchers.

1. you can replace your words with "Media publishes like everything..."
2. there are two verb in one sentence.
3. between should following with "and"


Unfortunately, as a result of media ambitious project, they often forgot[where is the verb goes???] that there are many infamous...

First of all,[is not right phrase; is not your first idea ] actors still famous even ...
There are still a lot of people that need media to ...[your explanation is not enough, too bias]
Imagine if the media uses their power to ...

Secondly, today some artistssometimes report the media to ...
In contrast, some media creates program that give many chances tofor ordinary people for ...

you should sumarize your idea in your conclusion, please


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