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When money speaks , Truth is silent


heena33 4 / 18  
May 18, 2011   #1
article 14 of the constitution provides:- "The State shall noy deny to any person equality before the law or the equal protection of the laws within the territory of India"

That mean no man is above the law of the land and that every person whatever be his rank or status , is subject to the common law and amenable to the juridiction of the ordinary tribunal. Sounds superb,isn,t it ? But over the years we find that this article is confined and seldom put into practise .

When money speak , Truth is silent is not new to our soil. Money is synonymous with power , influence, and also corruption. Mases knew that all the petitions and cries don't fall to the deaf ears of the judges but here the power of money works and ultimately truth hides.

When money speak , Truth is silent
ears are deaf and eyes r blind .
Powerful person keep on whistling ,
downtridden gets not even a trifling.
Who has a time to listen abt masses ,
When everyone is involved in his own clashes.
All real value have gone waste,
they r no more societies taste .
bt lets hope time will change,
as nothng in this world has a stable stage.

... ...hope frends u like it...bye
Neeta 5 / 38  
May 18, 2011   #2
It should be "the masses".

Did you write that?

btw, are you preparing for IETLS paper? If, yes you have to work on structure. Otherwise, you are pretty fine.

Take Care

Neeta
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
May 20, 2011   #3
That means no man is above the law of the land...

and that every person, whatever be his rank or status, is subject to the common law and amenable to the jurisdiction of the ordinary tribunal.

When money speaks, truth is silent. This concept is not new to our soil. ---I changed this for clarity.

I like the poem a lot!
OP heena33 4 / 18  
May 21, 2011   #4
THANX FOR LIKING THE POEM I TOO LIKED IT ITS MY OWN CREATION.
icy ciel - / 8  
May 21, 2011   #5
it's a really good poem ^^
although i don't know some of the words :(

fix those spellings and it'll be better! :D
change r ---> are
bt ---> but
nothng ---> nothing
OP heena33 4 / 18  
May 25, 2011   #6
actually to write fast this shortcut r the medium.


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